42.02 Horrible Poetry: Offseason

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42.02 Horrible Poetry: Offseason

Post by shoeless.db » Wed Mar 11, 2020 1:42 pm

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Offseason
by David "Horrible" Simpson

Staring passed me
eyes dark above his glove
he nods
and the world starts
-- as I wait


Shifting his stance
cleats soft over rubber
he rocks
and the world floats
-- as I wait


Lifting his leg
hands tight within leather
he holds
and the world leans
-- as I wait


Drawing apart
the ball swept behind him
he drives
and the world opens
-- as I wait


Spinning in air
moments slowed in my mind
I fire
and the world cracks
-- as I wake
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Re: 42.02 Horrible Poetry: Offseason

Post by HoosierVic » Wed Mar 11, 2020 1:54 pm

Wow! If only the world could've cracked during his playoff at-bats …

Seriously, though, nice poem. You build a nice feeling of tension with waiting … waiting … and then the release at the end. Cool.

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Re: 42.02 Horrible Poetry: Offseason

Post by shoeless.db » Wed Mar 11, 2020 2:00 pm

HoosierVic wrote:
Wed Mar 11, 2020 1:54 pm
If only the world could've cracked during his playoff at-bats …
Ouch... that will be his next poem...
Sacramento Mad Popes
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Life is a bit more beautiful when time is measured by the half inning rather than the half hour.

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